Not Just Another Day

She woke up
Softly kissed her son good-bye
As he still was sound asleep
She left for work before sunrise
Morning interrupted
Not good
School shooting
Her son an innocent victim
Life falls apart
Time passes
She wakes up
Rushes off to work
Rushes out of work
Rushes to the school
To pick up her son
He’s not there
She does this for days
Weeks
Months
Years
Hoping
That one day he will be there

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15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Wendell A. Brown
    Jan 22, 2013 @ 11:36:09

    So very real, it makes me feel their vulnerability, pain, and sadness after someone took their childs life away! excellent piece!

  2. Rosalie Squires
    Jan 18, 2013 @ 11:17:55

    RoSy, you conjure up such a scene – I keep wondering what do the other mums think, do, say when they see her. How many times must she do this before she becomes aware of them? Before their embarrassment makes her stop, the real world exerts a bigger influence than her remembered one?

  3. LuAnn
    Jan 16, 2013 @ 21:30:33

    How often does a parent feel this way since the Sandy Hook shooting? A very riveting poem RoSy.

  4. ManoliRizoFotografia
    Jan 15, 2013 @ 19:14:24

    ¡Que tristeza, doloroso al máximo!

  5. Ruby
    Jan 15, 2013 @ 16:48:21

  6. Lady Lovely
    Jan 15, 2013 @ 12:39:05

    Painfully powerful.

  7. Ruby
    Jan 15, 2013 @ 09:27:40

    You gave me goosebumps, so true though!

  8. readinpleasure
    Jan 15, 2013 @ 08:29:04

    Ow, this is so vivdly tragic. :-) The poor mother.

  9. lenwilliamscarver
    Jan 14, 2013 @ 23:54:52

    too real :(

  10. meiro
    Jan 14, 2013 @ 22:47:05

    I could feel the pain.
    Poignant.

    love,
    mei

  11. boomiebol
    Jan 14, 2013 @ 22:36:13

    Heartbreaking… Scary

  12. silentlyheardonce
    Jan 14, 2013 @ 20:53:05

    I’m sure it’s a horrible feeling. You made those feelings real with your words.

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Most photos taken by me. Photos not taken by me will have a mention of who took the photo or where it was taken from. Short stories & poems are purely fictional - unless noted differently. Creative liberties have been taken throughout. Feel free to print pages / photos from this blog for your own personal and non-commercial use. If sharing online - referring back to the original source is greatly appreciated. Thank you. PeAce- RoSy
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