Still waiting for that piece of my missing heart
That long ago you took away
Here you come now after all these years
To dangle it in front of my face
Why oh why have you returned
if you have no intention of giving it back
You & I can never be
So leave now
And – leave for eternity
But – before you go
Just please
Give me back
That piece of my heart
Piece of My Heart
17 Jan 2013 12 Comments
in Poetry- Sometimes With a Twist Tags: Broken Heart, Lost Love, Love, Poems, Poetry, relationships, Time
Jan 22, 2013 @ 11:57:06
Yes, emotionally moving
Jan 22, 2013 @ 11:31:51
It is hauntingly beautiful in a surreal sort of way…but i understand what your heart feels…hopefully it will be made whole again one day! I love the way you write…it is so very down to earth… so very soothing!
Jan 19, 2013 @ 18:43:49
Another great one tugging on my heart strings
Jan 19, 2013 @ 10:43:06
What if that piece of your heart isn’t returned? What if your heart kept–to be played?
What if you keep holding on to what never was? What if . . .
So emotionally mysterious and profound the expressions in your piece. I felt those words. Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing.
Jan 18, 2013 @ 23:54:13
Lovely RoSy and don’t we all have one of these stories in our background?
Jan 18, 2013 @ 22:06:08
Was never his, as you point out, so you should get it back RoSy, yours after all!
xox
Jan 18, 2013 @ 11:21:58
Here’s a question for you – if you were to get that bit back, would it still fit the place it was torn from?
Jan 18, 2013 @ 10:56:53
Broken hearts are the worst!! It brings back history…
Jan 18, 2013 @ 04:53:40
If it were that easy. Love how you reiterated that you still want that piece of your heart back. Nice Rosy.
Jan 18, 2013 @ 02:12:03
Jan 17, 2013 @ 23:20:55
I get it
. Very well done twinnie
Jan 17, 2013 @ 23:12:11
ooooo so rich and haunting…emotionally moving!!! (((XX)))