His Heart – Haibun Thinking

His hug was long & strong
He didn’t want to let me go
He knew that more was impossible
Because I told him so
But – that didn’t stop his feelings for me
As he took out his heart
& placed it in my hands for eternity

Steadily beating
with blind faith & solid hope
In the name of love

Haibun Thinking 11Feb14

Artwork by Anja Partin

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30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. readinpleasure
    Feb 19, 2014 @ 12:37:52

    How lovely!


  2. Charron's Chatter
    Feb 19, 2014 @ 10:28:38

    I like: “long and strong” — creates a great image in spare words.


  3. Wendell A. Brown
    Feb 18, 2014 @ 20:45:20

    Awesomely beautiful! I can only smile happily! Thanks for sharing such a jewel Rosy! Hugs and blessings to you!


  4. Sharmishtha Basu
    Feb 18, 2014 @ 03:11:49

    divine poem, fabulous sketch! loved them both!


  5. Anja
    Feb 17, 2014 @ 19:35:03

    Very beautiful!!!


  6. Pride in Photos Photography
    Feb 17, 2014 @ 13:52:05

    You have quite the talent with the pen my friend. Happy belated valentines day…I have been away for the last 4 days.


  7. LuAnn
    Feb 17, 2014 @ 09:28:41

    That was just awesome RoSy! :)


  8. aFrankAngle
    Feb 17, 2014 @ 09:17:02

    Beautiful and powerful writing, so cheers to your efforts!!!


  9. Al
    Feb 17, 2014 @ 03:50:17

    That is gorgeous, Rosy. I love it


  10. utesmile
    Feb 17, 2014 @ 03:46:20

    That sounds beautiful RoSy, Long not let go hugs from me too!


  11. Skye @ TheSanctuaryofMyHeart
    Feb 16, 2014 @ 21:37:34

    This was lovely, RoSy!!!!! ((Heck of a Haibun Hug!)) :)


  12. silentlyheardonce
    Feb 16, 2014 @ 20:49:36

    Very pretty Rosy.


  13. summerstommy2
    Feb 16, 2014 @ 20:48:34

    Well done RoSy, haibun is good.


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Most photos taken by me. Photos not taken by me will have a mention of who took the photo or where it was taken from. Short stories & poems are purely fictional - unless noted differently. Creative liberties have been taken throughout. Feel free to print pages / photos from this blog for your own personal and non-commercial use. If sharing online - referring back to the original source is greatly appreciated. Thank you. PeAce- RoSy

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